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08 July 2008 @ 09:48 am
Rules Are Rules  

Title: Rules are Rules

Rated: NC-17

Pairing: HoSu and ??? in the future

Genre: smut, angst, bdsm, etc

Warning: This story will contain VERY dark and adult themes...

Summary: Rules are rules. They are made to be followed. When they are not followed there are reprocussions. His life is simply filled with rules like these.

This is my first DBSK fic that I've actually let other people read so I hope it gets good responses. I'll continue if you all want me to =]

 

PROLOGUE

 

"Are you sure you don't want me to walk you in?"

 

Junsu scoffed at athe third offer he has received that day from his co-worker Changmin. A few simple bruises and now everyone thinks he's being beaten to death by his boyfriend or something. He was just clumsy is all really. If he paid atention to the schedule and the time like he was supposed to then he wouldn't be having to rush to do things.

 

"I'm fine Changmin. I'm akward in my own feet and you've seen it first hand at work."

 

"Yeah, you are a walking disaster."

 

Changmin received a lovely jab at the ribs from the walking disaster. "Thanks for the ride stupid."

 

"Learn how to take a joke idiot."

 

Being the immature man he was he stuck out his tongue and stepped out of the car remembering to grab at his work bag before he was locked out and flipped off.

 

The car pulled away leaving a shocked Kim Junsu. That stupid Changmin was going to get the worst wet willy ever when he least expects it, Junsu decides.

 

Junsu took quick steps to unlock his home and locked it right after him making sure to look at the clock above the dinner table and he sped off to take a shower. He undressed rather quickly and left his cell phone on the top of the sink.

 

With hot water pouring over his over worked body, he began to let his mind wander and began the usual routine of trying to make a giant bubble beard on his chin until he heard the first few notes of the melody of his cell phone ring tone.

 

Using lighting speed he rushed out of the shower while he slid and slipped to the front door. He fell to the ground, a shamless heap, and then kneeled down: body hunched over in a bow, knees spread evenly under him, eyes cast downward.

 

The door opened to reveal a dark haired man in a business suit, cell phone in hand. His face was void of emotion or thought as his eyes settled on the man that properly kneeled at his feet.

 

"Welcome home Master."

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heaven is endless.: Sakura Haruno ☆ Wind[info]silhouettedwing on July 8th, 2008 02:18 pm (UTC)
This looks promising, I'll be waiting for the next update (:
ufosighting[info]ufosighting on July 8th, 2008 03:03 pm (UTC)
thankies. i'm working on chapter one as we speak
Sumi[info]darknessgryphon on July 8th, 2008 02:50 pm (UTC)
Ooh... I'm intrigued. Please, please do continue!
ufosighting[info]ufosighting on July 8th, 2008 03:03 pm (UTC)
oh and continue i will XD
-Love-YJ[info]jm_love on July 8th, 2008 02:52 pm (UTC)
kinda nice start ^_^

so i guess the master is yunho? lol xD I haven read a hosu for quite some time x)

Can wait for the next chapter! ^_^
ufosighting[info]ufosighting on July 8th, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
that's exactly why i chose this pairing... i was going to do another but i was like nah, hosu doesn't have many chaptered fics so ehre it is.
chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on July 8th, 2008 02:59 pm (UTC)
Hm, this sounds interesting..so Su is a pet/ slave kinda thing or this is about bondage???

I wonder how dark this will get.....
ufosighting[info]ufosighting on July 8th, 2008 03:05 pm (UTC)
yeah... it's a like bdsk couple thing but this is what's called a 24/7 session in which they stick to their sessions when in the home, i'll explain it better in the first chapter.
lilbrattie[info]lilbrattie on July 8th, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC)
you so must continue this :)

anticipating, really. hehe.

anybody with Junsu seems fine to me :D
♥The Rainbow is both Sunshine and Rain♥[info]mfnx7mk2 on July 8th, 2008 04:11 pm (UTC)
ooh! looks so interestin!! so intrigued now! want to read more lol... ^^
shirahim3[info]shirahim3 on July 8th, 2008 07:15 pm (UTC)
omo omo omo~~

hosu

master slave

*_*

*dies*

lovely prologue <3

update soon <3<3
Alexis Tenshi: tvxq 5-1=0[info]winged_kame on July 8th, 2008 09:24 pm (UTC)
Interesting. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing and sharing!
cause really I'm just a narcissist[info]coolplastic19 on July 9th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
ohhhhh...this is really interesting.... O.O
You're going to continue it right? Please do <333 The whole master/slave dynamic is so hot, especially with HoSu. Really looking forward to finding out what happens next!!!
figmagination[info]figmagination on July 9th, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Wow... it`s been a while since I`ve read a HoSu fic and I really like the start of this. I haven`t seen many fics where the bdsm relationship is lifestyle (24/7) instead of just play. I am really excited to see where this fic will go. Please continue with it and update soon!!! ^^
M'ija[info]crazy_giggles on July 9th, 2008 05:56 am (UTC)
ohhh interesting

looking forward to the explanation of their relationship. im not sure if 24/7 includes outside of their home also??

anyway... HoSu needs some love!!!

master Yunho... how sexy =) looking forward to the next chap.
dulcemexicana[info]dulcemexicana on July 9th, 2008 06:34 am (UTC)
woooh i need to know more lol
Jaedon[info]jaedonluv on July 9th, 2008 08:30 am (UTC)
well this seems interesting. So Su is a slave? And Yunho is his mater? Definitely intriguing. But the master is in his home? Oo
Haha it's so cute how his usual routine includes 'trying to make a giant bubble beard on his chin' XD typical Su ahaha

update soon ne? <3333
formed by the rapid cooling of lava -- 黒曜石[info]mcgrjc6 on July 12th, 2008 07:52 pm (UTC)
Ooooh very dark indeed...I'm very interested!
dudeitslora[info]dudeitslora on July 15th, 2008 05:25 am (UTC)
sorry i forgot to comment after reading it
because i was too busy bookmarking it!
i love it
cant wait for next chapter !
ill be waiting!
usagi_bara[info]usagi_bara on July 22nd, 2008 03:00 pm (UTC)
I wan to read more~

<3!
dudeitslora[info]dudeitslora on August 2nd, 2008 03:50 am (UTC)
are you going to continue this story?i cant wait
please continue
ill be waiting thank you x]
jen0apple[info]jen0apple on October 20th, 2008 11:15 pm (UTC)
continue please!! =]
junsurolf123[info]junsurolf123 on November 19th, 2008 03:05 am (UTC)
hope u update soon...
girl_hosu[info]girl_hosu on June 12th, 2009 11:40 pm (UTC)
continue please!!

oh!! a slave...
 
 

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